Wednesday, 19 December 2012

Location Photos

 
House - INT - Landing taken from inside the bedroom of the banister and stairs which Bliss will push James down of
 
 
House - INT - The landing where the argument will take place just before James gets pushed and killed

 
House - INT - Bedroom where Bliss overhears James on the phone to Lily for the second time and where the arugment starts just before James gets killed

 
House - INT - Bedroom, another shot of the bedroom from a different angle showing where the door is and how the argument will take place. James will be standing in front of the mirror talking on the phone when Bliss barges through the door and throughs his phone
 
 
House - INT - Stairs which James will fall down and also where Bliss will walk down after the accident, it also gives an idea of the distance between the top and the bottom and how bad the impact of the fall will be

 
House - INT - Stairs, another shot but from a different angle of the stairs showing where Bliss will be after the accident

 
House - INT - Kitchen where the main argument will take place between Bliss and James
 
 
House - INT - Kitchen, another shot from a different angle of the kitchen also giving an idea of where the camera will be placed during shooting

Tuesday, 18 December 2012

Prop list - with photos



Mobile Phone - The one James uses when he rings Lily and the one Bliss throws in the bedroom



Home Telephone - The one which Bliss uses to call the almbulance after she murders James

Thursday, 13 December 2012

Final Choice on Music



I have chosen to use this piece of music because it has a variety of different paces and tunes, it is disposable to any mood and atmosphere so I can use this for the majority of my film, i.e. the argument in the kitchen and in the bedroom.



How To Get Different Shots Explained

 
 
This is how to frame your camera correctly.
 

 
 
Shot reverse shot of a conversation between two people, this could be used in my film when Bliss is talking and confronting James in the kitchen.
 

 
 
The use of close up here is used to show suspision within the character. The use of shadow on the face shows that darker side to the character and the use of light could signify that they have something to hide; a secret. I am using this to show that the character is ashamed of what they have been accused of and using the elements included to get the right lighting for the message I want to send to my audience.
 

Final Choice Casting

Role of Bliss Potter

Rebecca Foster

I chose Rebecca Foster to play Bliss because I believe that she is reliable and trustworthy and will turn up whenever I ask her to shoot. She also enjoys acting and isn't afraid to be in front of the camera, along with being willing to do anything I ask and enjoying it.



Role of James Flash

Nathan Alcock

I chose Nathan Alcock to play the role of James because he is how I imagined James to look when creating the character. He is also willing to do whatever I ask of him and also has a diverse personality which he can put forward and use when playing the character.

Casting Considerations

Role of Bliss Potter

Rebecca Foster
17
English Language, English Literature and Media Studies
Wyke Sixth Form College



 





















Beth Hirons
18
Sociology, Psychology, Media and Film Studies
Wyke Sixth Form College






















Role of James Flash

Alex Cheeseman
17
Sociology, English Language and Media Studies
Wyke Sixth Form College





 
























Nathan Alcock
18
Physics, Maths and Further Maths
Hull Collegiate School



















Adam Sidwell
17
Art, Photography and History
Hull Collegiate School

Wednesday, 12 December 2012

New Todorov Structure


Equilibrium

Protagonist - Bliss
Antagonist - James

Disruption

Bliss overhears her fiancé talking to another woman on the phone.

Quest

Arguing with James and finding out a way in which they can get through this and live together again.

Resolution (Re-equilibruim)

Bliss accidentally pushing James down the stairs after overhearing him again on the phone to the other woman agreeing to go behind Bliss' back and leave her. James dies from the impact of the fall so Bliss comes up with the idea to blame Lily, James' other woman, for the murder. 

Tuesday, 11 December 2012

New Screenplay

Sweet Revenge
 
By
 
Ellie Walker
 
 
 
INT. THE KITCHEN - DAY

JAMES IS STANDING AT THE KITCHEN WORKTOP READING THE MORNING PAPER WHILE DRINKING A COFFEE
 
EXT. STREET/DRIVE - DAY

BLISS GETS OUT OF THE CAR AND WALKS DOWN THE DRIVE TOWARDS THE FRONT DOOR
 
INT. THE KITCHEN - DAY
 
JAMES IS DRINKING HIS COFFEE WHEN HE GETS A PHONE CALL, HE PICKS UP THE PHONE.
 
JAMES
[Smiles and then turns so his back is to the kitchen door]
 
Hey baby, how you doing?
 

 
EXT. DRIVE - DAY

BLISS IS OPENING THE FRONT DOOR THEN WALKS INTO THE HOUSE. SHE LOOKS TIRED FROM A HARD NIGHTS WORK AT THE OFFICE.
 
INT. HALLWAY - DAY

BLISS IS TAKING HER COAT AND SHOES OFF AND STARTS TO WALK TOWARDS THE KITCHEN DOOR.
 
INT. THE KITCHEN - DAY
 
JAMES IS STILL ON THE PHONE TALKING TO LILY. HIS BACK IS STILL FACING THE DOOR, HE IS UNAWARE THAT BLISS HAS ENTERED THE HOUSE.
 
JAMES
[Smiling]
 
I can probably get away this afternoon, she's been working all night on some new project so she'll be out like a light in an hour.
 
[Laughs]
 
Yeah, I'm sure that can be arranged sweetheart.
 
INT. HALLWAY - DAY

BLISS HAS REACHED THE KITCHEN DOOR BUT IS LISTENING INTENTLY TO HER FIANCES CONVERSATION. SHE HAS A CONFUSED AND SHOCKED FACE.

JAMES
I can probably get away at 2ish, then I can get to yours around half past.
 
[Pauses for a few seconds]
 
No don't worry, she'll never noticed I've gone. It'll be only for a few hours Lily.
 
[Pauses for a few seconds]
 
Lily, didn't I already promise you this? As soon as she's got this project over with I'll end it, she's been going through a stressful time and I don't think it's fair to add to the stress.
 
[Pauses for a few seconds]
 
I'm not that vindictive Lily, I owe her this much. After all I am going to break her heart.
 
BLISS LOOKS CONFUSED AND HURT. SHE ENTERS THE KITCHEN. 

INT. KITCHEN - DAY

BLISS
[Breathless]
 
James?
 
JAMES TURNS, HIS FACE TURNS INTO SHOCK AND HORROR THEN SPEAKS INTO HIS PHONE.
 
JAMES
[In a mono tone voice]
 
Lily, I'm going to have to call you back. Yeah I'll ring you later.
 
HANGS UP THE PHONE.
 
Hey, Bliss. You're home early.
 
BLISS
[Breathless]
 
Who...who was that? On the...on the phone?
 
SILENCE.
 
BLISS
[Closes eyes then reopens them and looks into James eyes]
 
James. Who was that?
 
JAMES
[Swallows heavily]
 
Just a friend Bliss.
 
BLISS SHAKES HER HEAD THEN WALKS FORWARD A FEW STEPS.

BLISS
[Looks to the floor then up again]

Please James, who is she?

JAMES
[Looks away from Bliss]

No-one important Bliss, please just...you're tired, go to bed you've had a long night.

BLISS
[Shakes her head in disagreement]

No, no, no please James, please say it isn't true.

[Bliss starts to cry]

Please say you didn't.

JAMES
[Laughs nervously then walks towards Bliss]

I haven't..I would never, I love you Bliss..remember.

BLISS
[Tears running down her face]

James no..who is she?

[James reaches Bliss and gathers her in his arms, she wraps her arms around him and they hold each other lovingly]

Who is she?

JAMES
[Looks ahead and sighs]

She's no one, she's not important to you. We've...

[Coughs]

We slept together once and now she won't leave me alone Bliss. She's obsessed. Believe me.

BLISS
[Shakes her head in disagreement]

But you arranged to meet today James, I heard you.

[Bliss leans away from James' hold]

JAMES LOOK AWAY FROM BLISS AND SIGHS HEAVILY

BLISS
[Looks into James eyes and says strongly]
James.

JAMES
[Lets go of Bliss and walks back to his coffee and paper, puts his hands onto the counter and leans forward. He closes his eyes and sighs again]

It was just supposed to be a one time thing, you know to get it out of my system but somehow she wouldn't let me go.

[He closes his eyes and bows his head]

I tried Bliss, believe me I did but it happened again and I couldn't do anything to stop it.

[Pauses for a few moments]

Then it happened again and again, soon it became a a regular thing.

BLISS CHOKES ON HER SOB AND STARTS TO SHAKE HER HEAD AND WALK AWAY

JAMES
[Lifts his head and looks at Bliss with pleading eyes]

There wasn't any feelings, until she told me after we had done it that she loved me. I ended it because I loved you but you were so caught up in your work that you left me behind, I felt so alone so I went back to her.

[Pauses for a few moments]

That's when I well in love with her Bliss, I'm sorry I didn't mean any of this to happen but it just did.

[He stands up and attempts to walk over to Bliss]

I'm so sorry.

BLISS
[Puts her hands up to stop him and walks away from him]

No James. How could you?

[She looks into his eyes]

Are you saying this is my fault? Because I was working more and not paying you as much attention?

JAMES
No, Bliss. I was just lonely.

BLISS
[Says angrily]
No! Don't you dare use that excuse. I was lonely too.

JAMES LOOKS CONFUSED

Yes, I was working hard and all I wanted to do was come home to you but you weren't there. Instead you were sleeping with some slut. I was lonely James, you left me!

 THEY STAND IN SILENCE FOR A FEW MOMENTS
 
JAMES
[Rubs his face with his hands]
So..should I pack a bag?
 
BLISS
[Looks at James confused]
Do you think I'm going to let you go that easily?
 
SILENCE
 
Well you were mistaken
 
FADE TO BLACK
 
 
 
FADE IN
 
INT. STAIRS - NIGHT
 
BLISS IS WALKING UP THE STAIRS TOWARDS HER BEDROOM. SHE GOES TO OPEN THE BEDROOM DOOR WHEN SHE OVER HEARS JAMES ON THE PHONE.
 
JAMES
Don't worry baby, it's just one night and tomorrow I'll sneak out before she wakes up and that'll be the end. Don't worry.
 
[Pauses for a few moments]
 
Yeah she believed me, don't worry Lily it's all under control this time tomorrow this will be all over.
 
BLISS BURSTS INTO THE BEDROOM, GRABS JAMES' PHONE AND ENDS THE CALL.
 
BLISS
[Shouting]
I cannot believe you! You promised me it was over!
 
JAMES
[Pleadingily]
Bliss...
 
BLISS
No James this is the final straw.
 
BLISS WALKS OUT OF THE ROOM AND JAMES FOLLOWS HER
 
JAMES
[Confused]
Bliss where are you going? Stop it.
 
JAMES GRABS BLISS AND TRIES TO TALK TO HER BUT SHE RESISTSL.
 
BLISS
[Struggles with James]
Let me go you cheating bastard.
 
THEY STRUGGLE ON THE TOP OF THE STAIRS, BLISS FINALLY GETS FREE FROM JAMES HOLD BUT HE LOSES HIS FOOTING AND FALLS DOWN THE STAIRS.
 
 
 
FADE TO BLACK
 
 
 
FADE IN
 
INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT
 
JAMES IS LAYING MOTIONLESS ON THE FLOOR WITH BLISS STARING IN SHOCK AT THE TOP OF THE STAIRS. AFTER A FEW MOMENTS SHE STARTS TO DECEND THE STAIRS. SHE REACHES JAMES AND CHECKS FOR A PULSE BUT FINDS THAT THERE ISN'T ONE. SHE SITS AGAINST THE WALL AND HUGS HERSELF WHILE SHE ROCKS AND CRIES.
 
 
FADE TO BLACK
 
 
 
FADE IN
 
INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT
 
BLISS IS STILL ROCKING ON THE FLOOR AND CRYNG.
 
BLISS
[Looks up and breathes in heavily while wiping her tears away]
Come on Bliss pull yourself together. You've got to sort this mess out.
 
 
BLISS WALK AROUND THE HOUSE AND WONDERS WHAT TO DO, SHE REALISES THAT SHE MUST TRASH THE HOUSE TO MAKE IT LOOK LIKE THEY WERE ATTACKED BY BURGULARS.
 
BLISS
[Picks up the phone, call the police and cries in despair]
 
POLICE OPERATOR
999 what's your emergency
 
BLISS
[In despair]
Help, me and my fiance where attacked
 
POLICE OPERATOR
Is there anyone hurt?
 
BLISS
My fiance, he was pushed from the stairs and fell, now he wont wake up.
 
[Shouts]
Please help.
 
POLICE OPERATOR
Is he breathing?
 
BLISS
No I don't think so. I know who did it.
 
POLICE OPERATOR
Can you please give me a name.
 
BLISS
[Smiling evily]
Lily Blitz
 
 
FADE TO BLACK
 
FIN. 


Monday, 10 December 2012

New Synopsis

Hard working interior designer Bliss is coming home from a all nighter at work, when she over hears her fiance talking inappropriately to a woman on the phone. She listens intently from behind the door but when she cannot take anymore she walks in and interrupts James. She asks who was on the phone but he lies to her face, she stands her ground and continues to ask for the truth, finally James reveals the truth which is he slept with a woman called Lily which lead to an affair, he ended it but soon he rekindled the romance. After talking they both decide to try and work through this deceit. Later she overhears him talking to Lily on the phone in which he talks about leaving Bliss in the morning to continue his life with Lily. They argue again and after fighting at the top of the stairs James loses his footing and falls. Bliss knowing what will happen if everyone knew the truth decided to explain and make her and the house look like they had been attacked, so after trashing the house she rings the police and explains that she and her fiance had been attacked, when asked if she knew who attacked her, she tells the police it was Lily.

Friday, 7 December 2012

What went wrong - Planning the Second Draft

When I asked for feedback for my first draft I found that the majority of the people didn't understand the storyline and the ending. They said that the continuity was bad and that there wasn't much conventions of the thriller genre included and used.

Because of this my first draft isn't very good so I've decided to change the plot, instead of Bliss walking in on James and Lily, she will over hear his phone call then confront him. They have a an argument while James packs his bags to leave, but while they are arguing at the top of the stairs Bliss will push him and he will fall backwards and tumble down the stairs to his death. Bliss will run to his aid but after finding out he has died she will come up with a cover story, explaining to the police that they were broken into and attacked. The end sequence will be in flashes of Bliss trashing the house, making it look like it has been burgled.

Thursday, 29 November 2012

Problems

On Friday 23rd November I injured my left wrist, I went to the hospital on Tuesday 27th November where the nurse explained that I may have fractured the Scaphoid bone. They then referred me to the fracture clinic on Wednesday 28th November where I was then told by the doctor that I hadn't broken the Scaphoid bone but had damaged the ligament in my wrist which would normally allow me to move it. Because of this I am unable to use my wrist and I have been told to keep it wrapped in a bandage and splint for 2 weeks. I have also been referred to see the physiotherapy nurse were I will be treated. 

The problems which I will face because of this:

  • I will find it extremely difficult to film with the heavy equipment
  • I will be unable to carry the equipment from location to location
  • Setting up the equipment

What I will do to overcome this:

  • I will ask my friends and family for help so I will be able to do the above
  • Make sure that my friends/family are readily available for when I will need their help

Thursday, 22 November 2012

1st Draft with Comments of Improvement





1. Re-shoot the first flashback


- Bad continuity 
- Jumpy cuts
- The wind is blowing against the microphone creating a static sound
- More dialogue is needed so that James and Lily's relationship is more believable

2. Re-shoot the walking towards the house scene

- Bad continuity
- Colour and design of the bag changes 

3. Re-shoot the conversation between James and Bliss

- Bad continuity
- Curtains tied up in one scene then drawn in the next
- Needs more dialogue between them both 
- Bad lighting 
- Change of location (props in background are wrong for the narrative)

4. Added scene 

- Bliss in the kitchen making a cup of tea while James packs and leaves

5. Added scene 

- Bliss walking into their room and seeing all his belongings gone 
- Edit -- his stuff will be there but then disappear 

6. Added scene 

- Becky leaving her house to try and find James but then attacks him in a fit of fury and rage

7. Voice over

- Bliss talking over the film to explain what is happening and how she is changing

Thursday, 1 November 2012

Location, Filming, Costume, Hair and Make-up Shots

 
  • Hair shot - shots 3, 4, 6, 11, 12, 14, 16, 19, 21, 22, 29, 30, 31, 33, 36, 37, 39, 41, 43, 45, 46

 
  • Costume shot - shots 3, 4, 6, 11, 12, 14, 16, 19, 21, 22, 26, 27, 29, 30, 31, 33, 36, 37, 39, 41, 43, 45, 46

 
  • Location shot - shots 28, 33, 35, 36, 37, 38, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, 45, 46

 
  • Hair and make-up shot - shots 51
  • Hair down
  • Make-up - eyeliner, mascara, lipgloss

 
  • Costume shot - shot 51
  • Black long sleeved top, blue skinny jeans

Monday, 22 October 2012

Production Schedule


  • Friday 26th October 
  • Scenes with Bliss in the house
  • Shot 51

  • Tuesday 30th October
  • Marina Scenes 
  • Shots 1, 2, 24, 25, 47, 50, 52, 53, 54, 56, 59, 60, 62, 64, 66 
  • James getting attacked scenes
  • Shots 55, 57, 58, 61, 65
  • Bliss and James Scenes
  • Shots 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, 45, 46, 48, 49
  • Lily and James scenes
  • 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23

  • Monday 5th November
  • Put footage onto edit suites and start editing 

  • Monday 12th November
  • Finish editing 1st draft

  • Thursday 22nd November
  • Put 1st draft onto YouTube and Blogger