Problems

On Friday 23rd November I injured my left wrist, I went to the hospital on Tuesday 27th November where the nurse explained that I may have fractured the Scaphoid bone. They then referred me to the fracture clinic on Wednesday 28th November where I was then told by the doctor that I hadn't broken the Scaphoid bone but had damaged the ligament in my wrist which would normally allow me to move it. Because of this I am unable to use my wrist and I have been told to keep it wrapped in a bandage and splint for 2 weeks. I have also been referred to see the physiotherapy nurse were I will be treated. 

The problems which I will face because of this:

• I will find it extremely difficult to film with the heavy equipment
• I will be unable to carry the equipment from location to location
• Setting up the equipment

What I will do to overcome this:

• I will ask my friends and family for help so I will be able to do the above
• Make sure that my friends/family are readily available for when I will need their help

Hand Drawn Examples of How I Got Shots

Feedback for the 1st Draft of my Film 'Sweet Revenge'

Feedback for the first draft of my film by s0013223 on GoAnimate

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1st Draft with Comments of Improvement

1. Re-shoot the first flashback

- Bad continuity 

- Jumpy cuts

- The wind is blowing against the microphone creating a static sound

- More dialogue is needed so that James and Lily's relationship is more believable

2. Re-shoot the walking towards the house scene

- Bad continuity

- Colour and design of the bag changes 

3. Re-shoot the conversation between James and Bliss

- Bad continuity

- Curtains tied up in one scene then drawn in the next

- Needs more dialogue between them both 

- Bad lighting 

- Change of location (props in background are wrong for the narrative)

4. Added scene 

- Bliss in the kitchen making a cup of tea while James packs and leaves

5. Added scene 

- Bliss walking into their room and seeing all his belongings gone 

- Edit -- his stuff will be there but then disappear 

6. Added scene 

- Becky leaving her house to try and find James but then attacks him in a fit of fury and rage

7. Voice over

- Bliss talking over the film to explain what is happening and how she is changing

Location, Filming, Costume, Hair and Make-up Shots

 

• Hair shot - shots 3, 4, 6, 11, 12, 14, 16, 19, 21, 22, 29, 30, 31, 33, 36, 37, 39, 41, 43, 45, 46

 

• Costume shot - shots 3, 4, 6, 11, 12, 14, 16, 19, 21, 22, 26, 27, 29, 30, 31, 33, 36, 37, 39, 41, 43, 45, 46

 

• Location shot - shots 28, 33, 35, 36, 37, 38, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, 45, 46

 

• Hair and make-up shot - shots 51
• Hair down
• Make-up - eyeliner, mascara, lipgloss

 

• Costume shot - shot 51
• Black long sleeved top, blue skinny jeans